Ethical Dilemma

I need help fixing my paper that i did with a team group but things didn’t go well .
i have added the body and references pages that need to be added to the Conclusion and Intro plus i have a APA page i have to do . plus i have added the comments from my teacher that i need to fix.


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Did not remove the 8pt ‘after’ space set as the default in the program. Please be sure you follow the PPT lecture instructional documents – there is one that walks you through how to set up in Microsoft Word – it is the first lecture PPT listed in Bb. You must follow these steps BEFORE you start typing your outline to make sure it is done correctly. Otherwise, you’ll continue to lose a lot of points on assignments. The default settings do not allow for correct creation and formatting of outlines!

Additionally, did not manually type all of the information in the outline – use the ‘shortcut’ outlining tool to automatically insert some level identifiers. This results in an incorrectly formatted outline too. There should be an approximate and consistent 1/2 inch gap/space between each level identifier. This results in correct alignments throughout. Notice the gap/space between yoru Roman Numerals and the start of the sentence at that level; now, notice the gaps/space between the sub-point level identifiers and start of sentence and support level identifiers and start of sentence…see the difference?

ASME is not a person’s name and thus not allowed in this course. ALL sources MUST be a person’s name (last name).

Punctuation goes after citations only, not before (some were correct, several places this error occurs).

There must be a comma that separates the author’s last name and the year in citations.

Missing transitions

You CANNOT cite at the sub-point level – ever!

ALL sentences must be single sentences at each level, no multiple sentences allowed (see body.III.A for example)

ALL sentences must be complete sentences. No sentence fragments allowed.

this his the Teachers nots on the APA Page

Double space entire reference page, not single spaced with an extra line skipped between

No underlining – remove hyperlinks

ALL sources require an author’s last name, first initial. If this author info is not present, you can’t use that source. The first five on this page (maybe more, haven’t made it that far yet) are incorrect and not allowed!

Missing source name on several of the sources. The source name is to be italicized.

Capitalize the first letter in a title after a colon

If no date is present on an internet source, you use the current year (2020), not (n.d.)

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